Friday, July 16, 2010

let me tell you about my boat

we watched them build it
in their driveway for
fifteen years, how

they each took two hour
watches tied to the railing
in the middle of a pacific
night.

when i said lonely lonely
lonely, didn't mean it like
a bad thing, but they

can't seem to make an offer,
she says he's going alone
next time.

2 comments:

  1. The title is a line from "The Life Aquatic," which I watched for the first time last night (AMAZING), and the poem was "found" in a conversation my grandparents were having tonight about some friends who had sailed across the Pacific. :)

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  2. I can't believe you hadn't seen it. I totally caught the reference. I'm a huge fan. Of the Life Aquatic, and also the foundness of this poem. WIN!

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