tonight your lover asked me
for the poems
he knows i've been writing
about you.
he said
i will be the front row tears
when you read them.
he said
you said for me
to always write my own.
(even though i never let you read them.
you were the first and last boy i will be
ever so good at not breathing a word to)
(i will be ever so good at these poems for you,
even though you will never read them)
( i will be never be as better as breathing
your words like this
for him)
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I need to call a vote on this one - pick A or B:
ReplyDeleteA.
(i will never be as better AS breathing
your words like this
for him)
B.
(i will never be as better AT breathing
your words like this
for him)
I like B better, as it sits right now. But they are both so killer! If you chose A, my instinct would be to put a line break between better and as, and make it a little more digestible. It's a mouthful... But such a delicious one.
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