Wednesday, June 3, 2009

June 3rd

in the dawn, the sense of gray over traffic
under rain, under sky

under the water, the eyes open, then
blink away all this gray

at sunrise, blink over
a red muscle.

3 comments:

  1. A short one today, courtesy of this writing exercise:

    http://rationalpsychic.wordpress.com/2009/03/09/a-better-poetry-exercise-for-march/

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  2. Oooh. You're the queen of prompt-finding. I like this! Got any more?

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  3. Yes indeed! Rachel McKibbens' blog has some really detailed ones you might enjoy - look her up :D

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