Friday, June 5, 2009

June 5th

All I get
when the squat yellow taxi
brakes hard rolling back
for my shiny black business flats
is your cat-call of
"sorry 'bout that!"

3 comments:

  1. This actually happened to me tonight, and so it seemed like a good idea to try to make a tiny poem. (And, look! There are so many near-rhymes! Wasn't even intentional! I could make a song!)

    Kind of cheap, so I'll see if I can write another one for June 5th.

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  2. That annotation is officially longer than the poem. I am trying to learn to be succinct. Oh dear.

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  3. I love it! *love*
    Although that must have sucked in actuality...
    Off to Fleetwood Mac tonight! Might not make the deadline for tonight but I hope my extra yesterday poem will make up for it :)

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